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Act 5, Scene 2 — An Advanced post of the Volscian camp before Rome.
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The argument Menenius is stopped at the Volscian camp by guards who mock his confidence; Coriolanus appears, dismisses him coldly, and Menenius exits having been publicly humiliated by the man he loved like a son.
Enter Menenius to the Watch, or Guard.
First appearance
FIRST WATCH

The Watch speaks with the absolute certainty of men who have no personal stake — they've seen their general's transformation and believe in it completely. Watch for how their bluntness becomes the play's harshest verdict on Menenius's confidence.

FIRST WATCH [FIRST WATCH]

Stay! Whence are you?

Stay! Whence are you?

Stay! Whence are you?

stay! whence are you?

SECOND WATCH [SECOND WATCH]

Stand, and go back.

Stand, and go back.

Stand, and go back.

stand, and go back.

MENENIUS ≋ verse [MENENIUS]

You guard like men; ’tis well. But by your leave,

I am an officer of state and come

To speak with Coriolanus.

You guard like men; ’tis well. But by your leave, I am an officer of state and come To speak with Coriolanus.

You guard like men; ’tis well. But by your leave, I am an officer of state and come To speak with Coriolanus.

you guard like men; ’tis well. but by your leave, i am an of

FIRST WATCH [FIRST WATCH]

From whence?

From whence?

From whence?

from whence?

MENENIUS [MENENIUS]

From Rome.

From Rome.

From Rome.

from rome.

FIRST WATCH ≋ verse [FIRST WATCH]

You may not pass; you must return. Our general

Will no more hear from thence.

You may not pass; you must return. Our general Will no more hear from thence.

You may not pass; you must return. Our general Will no more hear from thence.

you may not pass; you must return. our general will no more

SECOND WATCH ≋ verse [SECOND WATCH]

You’ll see your Rome embraced with fire before

You’ll speak with Coriolanus.

You’ll see your Rome embraced with fire before You’ll speak with Coriolanus.

You’ll see your Rome embraced with fire before You’ll speak with Coriolanus.

you’ll see your rome embraced with fire before you’ll speak

MENENIUS ≋ verse [MENENIUS]

Good my friends,

If you have heard your general talk of Rome

And of his friends there, it is lots to blanks

My name hath touched your ears. It is Menenius.

Good my friends, If you have heard your general talk of Rome And of his friends there, it is lots to blanks My name hath touched your ears. It is Menenius.

Good my friends, If you have heard your general talk of Rome And of his friends there, it is lots to blanks My name hath touched your ears. It is Menenius.

good my friends, if you have heard your general talk of rome

FIRST WATCH ≋ verse [FIRST WATCH]

Be it so; go back. The virtue of your name

Is not here passable.

Be it so; go back. The virtue of your name Is not here passable.

Be it so; go back. The virtue of your name Is not here passable.

be it so; go back. the virtue of your name is not here passa

MENENIUS ≋ verse [MENENIUS]

I tell thee, fellow,

Thy general is my lover. I have been

The book of his good acts, whence men have read

His fame unparalleled happily amplified;

For I have ever verified my friends—

Of whom he’s chief—with all the size that verity

Would without lapsing suffer. Nay, sometimes,

Like to a bowl upon a subtle ground,

I have tumbled past the throw, and in his praise

Have almost stamped the leasing. Therefore, fellow,

I must have leave to pass.

I tell thee, fellow, Thy general is my lover. I have been The book of his good acts, whence men have read His fame unparalleled happily amplified; For I have ever verified my friends— Of whom he’s chief—with all the size that verity Would without lapsing suffer. Nay, sometimes, Like to a bowl upon a subtle ground, I have tumbled past the throw, and in his praise Have almost stamped the leasing. Therefore, fellow, I must have leave to pass.

I tell thee, fellow, Thy general is my lover. I have been The book of his good acts, whence men have read His fame unparalleled happily amplified; For I have ever verified my friends— Of whom he’s chief—with all the size that verity Would without lapsing suffer. Nay, sometimes, Like to a bowl upon a subtle ground, I have tumbled past the throw, and in his praise Have almost stamped the leasing. Therefore, fellow, I must have leave to pass.

i tell thee, fellow, thy general is my lover. i have been th

FIRST WATCH [FIRST WATCH]

Faith, sir, if you had told as many lies in his behalf as you have

uttered words in your own, you should not pass here, no, though it were

as virtuous to lie as to live chastely. Therefore, go back.

Faith, sir, if you had told as many lies in his behalf as you have uttered words in your own, you should not pass here, no, though it were as virtuous to lie as to live chastely. Therefore, go back.

Faith, sir, if you had told as many lies in his behalf as you have uttered words in your own, you should not pass here, no, though it were as virtuous to lie as to live chastely. Therefore, go back.

faith, sir, if you had told as many lies in his behalf as yo

MENENIUS [MENENIUS]

Prithee, fellow, remember my name is Menenius, always factionary on the

party of your general.

Prithee, fellow, remember my name is Menenius, always factionary on the party of your general.

Prithee, fellow, remember my name is Menenius, always factionary on the party of your general.

prithee, fellow, remember my name is menenius, always factio

SECOND WATCH [SECOND WATCH]

Howsoever you have been his liar, as you say you have, I am one that,

telling true under him, must say you cannot pass. Therefore go back.

Howsoever you have been his liar, as you say you have, I am one that, telling true under him, must say you cannot pass. Therefore go back.

Howsoever you have been his liar, as you say you have, I am one that, telling true under him, must say you cannot pass. Therefore go back.

howsoever you have been his liar, as you say you have, i am

MENENIUS [MENENIUS]

Has he dined, can’st thou tell? For I would not speak with him till

after dinner.

Has he dined, can’st thou tell? For I would not speak with him till after dinner.

Has he dined, can’st thou tell? For I would not speak with him till after dinner.

has he dined, can’st thou tell? for i would not speak with h

FIRST WATCH [FIRST WATCH]

You are a Roman, are you?

You are a Roman, are you?

You are a Roman, are you?

you are a roman, are you?

MENENIUS [MENENIUS]

I am, as thy general is.

I am, as thy general is.

I am, as thy general is.

i am, as thy general is.

FIRST WATCH [FIRST WATCH]

Then you should hate Rome as he does. Can you, when you have pushed out

your gates the very defender of them, and, in a violent popular

ignorance given your enemy your shield, think to front his revenges

with the easy groans of old women, the virginal palms of your

daughters, or with the palsied intercession of such a decayed dotant as

you seem to be? Can you think to blow out the intended fire your city

is ready to flame in with such weak breath as this? No, you are

deceived. Therefore back to Rome and prepare for your execution. You

are condemned. Our general has sworn you out of reprieve and pardon.

Then you should hate Rome as he does. Can you, when you have pushed out your gates the very defender of them, and, in a violent popular ignorance given your enemy your shield, think to front his revenges with the easy groans of old women, the virginal palms of your daughters, or with the palsied intercession of such a decayed dotant as you seem to be? Can you think to blow out the intended fire your city is ready to flame in with such weak breath as this? No, you are deceived. Therefore back to Rome and prepare for your execution. You are condemned. Our general has sworn you out of reprieve and pardon.

Then you should hate Rome as he does. Can you, when you have pushed out your gates the very defender of them, and, in a violent popular ignorance given your enemy your shield, think to front his revenges with the easy groans of old women, the virginal palms of your daughters, or with the palsied intercession of such a decayed dotant as you seem to be? Can you think to blow out the intended fire your city is ready to flame in with such weak breath as this? No, you are deceived. Therefore back to Rome and prepare for your execution. You are condemned. Our general has sworn you out of reprieve and pardon.

then you should hate rome as he does. can you, when you have

MENENIUS ≋ verse [MENENIUS]

Sirrah, if thy captain knew I were here, he would use me with

estimation.

Sirrah, if thy captain knew I were here, he would use me with estimation.

Sirrah, if thy captain knew I were here, he would use me with estimation.

sirrah, if thy captain knew i were here, he would use me wit

SECOND WATCH [SECOND WATCH]

Come, my captain knows you not.

Come, my captain knows you not.

Come, my captain knows you not.

come, my captain knows you not.

MENENIUS [MENENIUS]

I mean thy general.

I mean thy general.

I mean thy general.

i mean thy general.

FIRST WATCH [FIRST WATCH]

My general cares not for you. Back, I say, go, lest I let forth your

half pint of blood. Back! That’s the utmost of your having. Back!

My general cares not for you. Back, I say, go, lest I let forth your half pint of blood. Back! That’s the utmost of your having. Back!

My general cares not for you. Back, I say, go, lest I let forth your half pint of blood. Back! That’s the utmost of your having. Back!

my general cares not for you. back, i say, go, lest i let fo

MENENIUS [MENENIUS]

Nay, but fellow, fellow—

Nay, but fellow, fellow—

Nay, but fellow, fellow—

nay, but fellow, fellow—

Enter Coriolanus with Aufidius.
CORIOLANUS [CORIOLANUS]

What’s the matter?

What’s the matter?

What’s the matter?

what’s the matter?

MENENIUS [MENENIUS]

Now, you companion, I’ll say an errand for you. You shall know now that

I am in estimation; you shall perceive that a Jack guardant cannot

office me from my son Coriolanus. Guess but by my entertainment with

him if thou stand’st not i’ th’ state of hanging or of some death more

long in spectatorship and crueller in suffering; behold now presently,

and swoon for what’s to come upon thee. [_to Coriolanus_.] The glorious

gods sit in hourly synod about thy particular prosperity and love thee

no worse than thy old father Menenius does! O my son, my son! Thou art

preparing fire for us; look thee, here’s water to quench it. I was

hardly moved to come to thee; but being assured none but myself could

move thee, I have been blown out of your gates with sighs, and conjure

thee to pardon Rome and thy petitionary countrymen. The good gods

assuage thy wrath and turn the dregs of it upon this varlet here, this,

who, like a block, hath denied my access to thee.

Now, you companion, I’ll say an errand for you. You shall know now that I am in estimation; you shall perceive that a Jack guardant cannot office me from my son Coriolanus. Guess but by my entertainment with him if thou stand’st not i’ th’ state of hanging or of some death more long in spectatorship and crueller in suffering; behold now presently, and swoon for what’s to come upon thee. [_to Coriolanus_.] The glorious gods sit in hourly synod about thy particular prosperity and love thee no worse than thy old father Menenius does! O my son, my son! Thou art preparing fire for us; look thee, here’s water to quench it. I was hardly moved to come to thee; but being assured none but myself could move thee, I have been blown out of your gates with sighs, and conjure thee to pardon Rome and thy petitionary countrymen. The good gods assuage thy wrath and turn the dregs of it upon this varlet here, this, who, like a block, hath denied my access to thee.

Now, you companion, I’ll say an errand for you. You shall know now that I am in estimation; you shall perceive that a Jack guardant cannot office me from my son Coriolanus. Guess but by my entertainment with him if thou stand’st not i’ th’ state of hanging or of some death more long in spectatorship and crueller in suffering; behold now presently, and swoon for what’s to come upon thee. [_to Coriolanus_.] The glorious gods sit in hourly synod about thy particular prosperity and love thee no worse than thy old father Menenius does! O my son, my son! Thou art preparing fire for us; look thee, here’s water to quench it. I was hardly moved to come to thee; but being assured none but myself could move thee, I have been blown out of your gates with sighs, and conjure thee to pardon Rome and thy petitionary countrymen. The good gods assuage thy wrath and turn the dregs of it upon this varlet here, this, who, like a block, hath denied my access to thee.

now, you companion, i’ll say an errand for you. you shall kn

CORIOLANUS [CORIOLANUS]

Away!

Away!

Away!

away!

Why it matters The single word that ends Menenius's mission — and twenty years of relationship — is exactly one syllable.
🎭 Dramatic irony Coriolanus's 'Away!' to Menenius is followed in 5-3 by his first word to Virgilia — 'My lord and husband' — met with 'These eyes are not the same I wore in Rome.' The contrast is the play's hinge.
MENENIUS [MENENIUS]

How? Away?

How? Away?

How? Away?

how? away?

CORIOLANUS ≋ verse [CORIOLANUS]

Wife, mother, child, I know not. My affairs

Are servanted to others. Though I owe

My revenge properly, my remission lies

In Volscian breasts. That we have been familiar,

Ingrate forgetfulness shall poison rather

Than pity note how much. Therefore begone.

Mine ears against your suits are stronger than

Your gates against my force. Yet, for I loved thee,

Take this along; I writ it for thy sake,

Wife, mother, child, I know not. My affairs Are servanted to others. Though I owe My revenge properly, my remission lies In Volscian breasts. That we have been familiar, Ingrate forgetfulness shall poison rather Than pity note how much. Therefore begone. Mine ears against your suits are stronger than Your gates against my force. Yet, for I loved thee, Take this along; I writ it for thy sake,

Wife, mother, child, I know not. My affairs Are servanted to others. Though I owe My revenge properly, my remission lies In Volscian breasts. That we have been familiar, Ingrate forgetfulness shall poison rather Than pity note how much. Therefore begone. Mine ears against your suits are stronger than Your gates against my force. Yet, for I loved thee, Take this along; I writ it for thy sake,

wife, mother, child, i know not. my affairs are servanted to

[_He gives Menenius a paper._]
And would have sent it. Another word, Menenius,
I will not hear thee speak.—This man, Aufidius,
Was my beloved in Rome; yet thou behold’st.
AUFIDIUS [AUFIDIUS]

You keep a constant temper.

You keep a constant temper.

You keep a constant temper.

you keep a constant temper.

[_They exit._]
[_The Guard and Menenius remain._]
FIRST WATCH [FIRST WATCH]

Now, sir, is your name Menenius?

Now, sir, is your name Menenius?

Now, sir, is your name Menenius?

now, sir, is your name menenius?

SECOND WATCH [SECOND WATCH]

’Tis a spell, you see, of much power. You know the way home again.

’Tis a spell, you see, of much power. You know the way home again.

’Tis a spell, you see, of much power. You know the way home again.

’tis a spell, you see, of much power. you know the way home

FIRST WATCH [FIRST WATCH]

Do you hear how we are shent for keeping your Greatness back?

Do you hear how we are shent for keeping your Greatness back?

Do you hear how we are shent for keeping your Greatness back?

do you hear how we are shent for keeping your greatness back

SECOND WATCH [SECOND WATCH]

What cause do you think I have to swoon?

What cause do you think I have to swoon?

What cause do you think I have to swoon?

what cause do you think i have to swoon?

MENENIUS [MENENIUS]

I neither care for th’ world nor your general. For such things as you,

I can scarce think there’s any, you’re so slight. He that hath a will

to die by himself fears it not from another. Let your general do his

worst. For you, be that you are, long; and your misery increase with

your age! I say to you, as I was said to, away!

I neither care for th’ world nor your general. For such things as you, I can scarce think there’s any, you’re so slight. He that hath a will to die by himself fears it not from another. Let your general do his worst. For you, be that you are, long; and your misery increase with your age! I say to you, as I was said to, away!

I neither care for th’ world nor your general. For such things as you, I can scarce think there’s any, you’re so slight. He that hath a will to die by himself fears it not from another. Let your general do his worst. For you, be that you are, long; and your misery increase with your age! I say to you, as I was said to, away!

i neither care for th’ world nor your general. for such thin

[_Exit._]
FIRST WATCH [FIRST WATCH]

A noble fellow, I warrant him.

A noble fellow, I warrant him.

A noble fellow, I warrant him.

a noble fellow, i warrant him.

SECOND WATCH [SECOND WATCH]

The worthy fellow is our general. He is the rock, the oak not to be

wind-shaken.

The worthy fellow is our general. He is the rock, the oak not to be wind-shaken.

The worthy fellow is our general. He is the rock, the oak not to be wind-shaken.

the worthy fellow is our general. he is the rock, the oak no

[_Exeunt._]

The Reckoning

One of the cruelest scenes Shakespeare ever wrote — not cruel in a villainous way, but in the way life is cruel. Menenius arrives with absolute confidence in his relationship with Coriolanus, is blocked by guards who treat him with contempt, performs his identity for their benefit, and then gets a single word from Coriolanus: 'Away.' The man who called him father sends him home with a letter. The scene ends with the guards getting the last word — and they're right. Their general is 'the rock, the oak not to be wind-shaken.'

If this happened today…

The company's founder, who mentored the new CEO, shows up at the executive floor to talk him out of a catastrophic decision. Security stops him. He name-drops. They let him wait. The CEO appears, looks through him, and says: 'This isn't a good time.' He hands the founder a printed letter and goes back inside. The security guards exchange glances: 'Yeah. He's changed.' The founder leaves talking tough. He's destroyed.

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