Sonnet 116

True love is immutable and eternal; it cannot alter with circumstance or be subject to time, and if this be error, I have never written truthfully or loved rightly.

Original
Modern
1 Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Let me not to the marriage of true minds
2 Admit impediments, love is not love
Admit impediments. Love is not love
3 Which alters when it alteration finds,
Which alters when it alteration finds,
4 Or bends with the remover to remove.
Or bends with the remover to remove:
5 O no, it is an ever-fixed mark
O no; it is an ever-fixed mark
6 That looks on tempests and is never shaken;
That looks on tempests and is never shaken;
7 It is the star to every wand’ring bark,
It is the star to every wand'ring bark,
8 Whose worth’s unknown, although his height be taken.
Whose worth's unknown, although his height be taken.
Volta The volta shifts from definitions of love's permanence to defending against time's specific weapon: mortality and bodily decay.
9 Love’s not Time’s fool, though rosy lips and cheeks
Love's not Time's fool
Love's not Time's fool, though rosy lips and cheeks
10 Within his bending sickle’s compass come,
Within his bending sickle's compass come:
11 Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,
Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,
12 But bears it out even to the edge of doom:
But bears it out even to the edge of doom.
13 If this be error and upon me proved,
If this be error and upon me proved,
14 I never writ, nor no man ever loved.
I never writ, nor no man ever loved.
The Definition and the Wager

The opening quatrain defines love through negation: 'love is not love' if it 'alters' or 'bends.' The speaker stakes absolute claims, then doubles down with the 'ever-fixed mark' that 'looks on tempests and is never shaken.' The final couplet makes this a wager: if his definition of love is wrong, then he has 'never writ' anything truthful. The sonnet's entire credibility depends on this claim being true.

Love vs. Time's Erosion

The sestet confronts Time directly, denying that Time is love's fool. Though 'rosy lips and cheeks' wither within 'his bending sickle's compass,' love 'alters not with his brief hours and weeks' but 'bears it out even to the edge of doom.' This is love as metaphysical principle transcending bodily decay. The image of the sickle (death's weapon) gives urgency to the claim.

If this happened today

You've been with someone through job loss, family crisis, moving countries, and you realize that what you have isn't excitement that fades—it's a bedrock that gets stronger under pressure. It's not about luck or circumstance; it's structural.